Mo' Beta

I got a request to send an old A:tS story to a new archive yesterday. It could really use a good rewrite, but frankly I'm too much of a slacker. Anyone feel like doing a beta on it? I'm still a betavirgin; never beta'd, never been beta'd.
Fan Seeking Fan for fun and editorial skills.

Actually, I'm a pretty decent editor of other people's works. I'd be happy to exchange, if you can hack the slack.
:O)